Thursday, October 7, 2010

Experimental fourth grade Wenshan

 Etched in my heart the most noble flower, not a very tall oak, elegant Malian not, nor is it attractive fragrant narcissus, but dazzling morning glory.

into the yard of my house, you can see a morning glory Zhu Zhu. Morning glory looks like a small speaker, and its colors are white, red, blue, and purple. But most are purple, grow in the bud just like a small screw, with the white and purple, how beautiful! Into a look, morning glory leaves are oval,UGGs, and very green, it is so bright green, green seems to shine. Purple As long as the wall or place the plant, morning glory can grow. Just getting out of a deep purple morning glory, driving drove into a light purple, and then withered. Not because it is open from morning glory flower so beautiful and proud,UGG boots, not because it will quickly wither and sad, morning glory this character, the character is not what people lack it?

a morning glory, you get to the garden to grow at home, has brought me happiness, you let me know the good, be not proud, not sad failure, Is this a morning glory I treasure is not worth it?

a morning glory

Simon Blake-Wilson Yu

(Revised)

etched in my heart the most noble flower, not a very tall oak, not Malian elegant, nor is it fragrant daffodils charming, but the dazzling morning glory.

into my yard, greeted the morning glory is a lush Zhu Zhu. Morning glory looks like a small speaker, and its colors are white, red, blue, and purple. But most are purple, grow in the bud just like a small screw, with the white and purple, how beautiful! Closer, morning glory leaves are oval,UGG boots clearanc, and very green, it is so bright green, green seems to shine. Purple (Well written, describing the wonderful metaphor appropriate) as long as the wall or place the plant, morning glory can grow. Just getting out of a deep purple morning glory, driving drove into a light purple, and then withered. Not because it is open from morning glory flower so beautiful and proud, not because it will quickly wither and sad, morning glory this character, the character is not what people lack it? (Anthropomorphic use of techniques and asked to sentence more exciting)

a morning glory, you get to the garden to grow at home,Discount UGG boots, has brought me happiness, you let me know the good, not pride failure do not be sad, Is this a morning glory is not worth my treasure?

Reviews: Shaun of the composition is excellent, concise and accurate language, Lenovo was recalling the tragic, the scene of natural integration. Through vivid descriptions of the language, so that readers can better understand your pen in the morning glory is like. If you will do a little better written scenes, the article it even more okay. Oh Come on, success will be waving to you.

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